Mr. Linden’s Library
by:Stephanie A.
Every Halloween night Mr. Linden puts a table full of scary books so people could check them out. The library was there for 11 years as long as I remember. It had been in Mr. Linden’s family for a pretty long time so you could imagine how it was. The walls were dirty and the paint was coming out plus the windows were broken . Mr. Linden had no time to clean the library because he was too busy with customers coming in and out of the library. That night the library was all alone like it was on Halloween night it was rare that people came.
All of the sudden a lady came in she was not that tall and not that small. She was young , pretty, and intelligent--you could tell by the way she looked for books. Plus she got really good books. "Good night Mr.Linden,” said the girl.
"Well, good night to you too, Vanessa. What brings you here this day?”asked Mr. Linden.
"I want a book that makes me want to scream all the night and I mean it,” said Vanessa.
"I’m going to show you the most scariest book, but I have to warn you there’s something weird about that book ,”uttered Mr. Linden.The last person that read it was found dead in their own house. She took the book even when Mr. linden told her the risk she was taking.
When Vanessa got to her house she got comfortable and she started to read.Meanwhile Mr. Linden wanted to call Vanessa back so he could save someones life and destroy that book.At that moment Mr. Linden heard a scream that came from Vanessa’s apartment.
When he got there Vanessa was in the ground she looked like she was sleeping but the true was that she was dead.Mr. Linden took the book and ripped the pages from it and threw it away.
The next morning Mr. Linden put the scary books back in there shelves and suddenly the book was back.In that moment he backed up and !BOOM! the shelves crashed him, he was dead.
During the funeral ,Alice, Mr.Linden’s niece got a newsletter that was left for her written by Mr.Linden.It said that now that he was dead she was going to be in charge of the library.She was so happy that she was in the family work .The question was what will happen to her.
Will she survive the terrible book?
by:Stephanie A.
Every Halloween night Mr. Linden puts a table full of scary books so people could check them out. The library was there for 11 years as long as I remember. It had been in Mr. Linden’s family for a pretty long time so you could imagine how it was. The walls were dirty and the paint was coming out plus the windows were broken . Mr. Linden had no time to clean the library because he was too busy with customers coming in and out of the library. That night the library was all alone like it was on Halloween night it was rare that people came.
All of the sudden a lady came in she was not that tall and not that small. She was young , pretty, and intelligent--you could tell by the way she looked for books. Plus she got really good books. "Good night Mr.Linden,” said the girl.
"Well, good night to you too, Vanessa. What brings you here this day?”asked Mr. Linden.
"I want a book that makes me want to scream all the night and I mean it,” said Vanessa.
"I’m going to show you the most scariest book, but I have to warn you there’s something weird about that book ,”uttered Mr. Linden.The last person that read it was found dead in their own house. She took the book even when Mr. linden told her the risk she was taking.
When Vanessa got to her house she got comfortable and she started to read.Meanwhile Mr. Linden wanted to call Vanessa back so he could save someones life and destroy that book.At that moment Mr. Linden heard a scream that came from Vanessa’s apartment.
When he got there Vanessa was in the ground she looked like she was sleeping but the true was that she was dead.Mr. Linden took the book and ripped the pages from it and threw it away.
The next morning Mr. Linden put the scary books back in there shelves and suddenly the book was back.In that moment he backed up and !BOOM! the shelves crashed him, he was dead.
During the funeral ,Alice, Mr.Linden’s niece got a newsletter that was left for her written by Mr.Linden.It said that now that he was dead she was going to be in charge of the library.She was so happy that she was in the family work .The question was what will happen to her.
Will she survive the terrible book?
11 comments:
i like the scary parts it a very good story!!!!
Well I think the same as the tyrrell dragons comment that I like the scat part too . I love the story
I suggest you put another title.-FN
I love how you wrote the story ;)
I like your story it is very misterious
Mrs. punchy
i like your story i liked the scary parts too.
Messi 10
I suggest more characters and a longer story.
C.Ronaldo
I liked your story very much,i think some parts were very good.You should put another title, because ,well i dont like it much.Put that is your story not mine.
i like your story because its cool and scary
dino 02
i like it
i liked this story ,but i suggest t put another title.
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