Archie Smith, Boy Wonder
A tiny voice asked, “Is he the one?” they moved closer, “yes I think he is the one,” another tiny voice said. The boy was sleeping in his bed. He had left the window open; it was a mistake. Two balls of light came in floating magically. They had been waiting for this day and it was finally here.
“He has the mark, ”they said. “I think it is wrong to take him , but we have orders and we can’t disobey.” The boy’s mom had told him not to leave the window open; she knew what was going to happen because she also had the mark.
They were going to take her away when she was his age, but her mom did a quest so they wouldn’t take her away it was a hard quest very dangerous monsters, animals, and strangers.
His mom got up at night as always to check if the window was closed. “Oh no! They have gotten in," screamed the boy’s mom.
His dad came running "What happened?” He saw the window “Oh no.
The boy woke up. “What happened?” he said.
"It's time to say goodbye,”said his mom.
“But why?” he asked.
“You’ll know when you get there,” his parents said.
THE END
A tiny voice asked, “Is he the one?” they moved closer, “yes I think he is the one,” another tiny voice said. The boy was sleeping in his bed. He had left the window open; it was a mistake. Two balls of light came in floating magically. They had been waiting for this day and it was finally here.
“He has the mark, ”they said. “I think it is wrong to take him , but we have orders and we can’t disobey.” The boy’s mom had told him not to leave the window open; she knew what was going to happen because she also had the mark.
They were going to take her away when she was his age, but her mom did a quest so they wouldn’t take her away it was a hard quest very dangerous monsters, animals, and strangers.
His mom got up at night as always to check if the window was closed. “Oh no! They have gotten in," screamed the boy’s mom.
His dad came running "What happened?” He saw the window “Oh no.
The boy woke up. “What happened?” he said.
"It's time to say goodbye,”said his mom.
“But why?” he asked.
“You’ll know when you get there,” his parents said.
THE END
4 comments:
what happend next
it would have been better if you kept on going
it was good, but weres the end
it was good but it it was better if you kept going and put more details
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