A Strange Day in July
On one Saturday afternoon Karen and Joy decided to go outside and have some fun with the lake. But first they asked permission to their grandma. Their parents were no longer more with them because they had mysteriously disappeared one morning , fishing on the large lake.
So their grandma did gave permission to them to have fun , but with one condition. They must come before the sun leaves.
As they left happily racing to the lake , Karen got an idea of what to play first. Skipping rocks threw the lake's water. It wasn't a racing game nor a winning game. They were just going to play for fun.
About ten minutes later they couldn't breath any more , so they took a rest on one of those huge rocks that are as big as a tree. Next , Joy showed Karen how a strong boy throws a rock on to the water that will not stop skipping." Yeah right," Karen said in a low voice making sure not to let Joy hear.
The first stone only skipped two times. The second one just went down into the deep lake.He threw with all his might , but the third stone came skipping back. It hit his top of his forehead and down he fell in the dirty mud floor. Karen slid down from the huge rock screaming "Joy , Joy!" Running to help him , she grab his forehead rubbing it , but more blood came out. The cut didn't seem to hurt that much because Joy then stood up.
Trying to get revange , Joy threw about three rocks at the same time and again the rock came back, but this time it hit the innocent girl. She began to move her injured arm. A thin stream of blood came down. With the help of his brother , he gave her water in both hands to calm. The water wasn't salty at all , and that was really strange. She drank more and all the pain went off. Was the water magic?
Anyway , Joy was pleased that Karen didn't said "eeow" or "no" when she drank water. Besides, Karen's cut closed and her stream of blood had already dried. His brother was still touching his forehead and was impressed by her sister's cut, it vanished. So he decided to drink water too , no matter what. When suddenly a blood drop fell into the water from his head and two voices came out in the foggy air "we are free!"
By Diego Ramirez
On one Saturday afternoon Karen and Joy decided to go outside and have some fun with the lake. But first they asked permission to their grandma. Their parents were no longer more with them because they had mysteriously disappeared one morning , fishing on the large lake.So their grandma did gave permission to them to have fun , but with one condition. They must come before the sun leaves.
As they left happily racing to the lake , Karen got an idea of what to play first. Skipping rocks threw the lake's water. It wasn't a racing game nor a winning game. They were just going to play for fun.
About ten minutes later they couldn't breath any more , so they took a rest on one of those huge rocks that are as big as a tree. Next , Joy showed Karen how a strong boy throws a rock on to the water that will not stop skipping." Yeah right," Karen said in a low voice making sure not to let Joy hear.
The first stone only skipped two times. The second one just went down into the deep lake.He threw with all his might , but the third stone came skipping back. It hit his top of his forehead and down he fell in the dirty mud floor. Karen slid down from the huge rock screaming "Joy , Joy!" Running to help him , she grab his forehead rubbing it , but more blood came out. The cut didn't seem to hurt that much because Joy then stood up.
Trying to get revange , Joy threw about three rocks at the same time and again the rock came back, but this time it hit the innocent girl. She began to move her injured arm. A thin stream of blood came down. With the help of his brother , he gave her water in both hands to calm. The water wasn't salty at all , and that was really strange. She drank more and all the pain went off. Was the water magic?
Anyway , Joy was pleased that Karen didn't said "eeow" or "no" when she drank water. Besides, Karen's cut closed and her stream of blood had already dried. His brother was still touching his forehead and was impressed by her sister's cut, it vanished. So he decided to drink water too , no matter what. When suddenly a blood drop fell into the water from his head and two voices came out in the foggy air "we are free!"
By Diego Ramirez
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This story has many details i liked this story because the water was magic!!!!!!!!1
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