Archie Smith , Boy Wonder
A tiny voice asked ," Is him the one ?".The Boy wonder who would be the next boy that would be tricked by his friends to go alone inside the old barn and they would never come out again .
It started when the owner of the barn died inside the barn . Then when some kids came from school and passed by the barn and they heard a voice calling them to go inside the barn . Then a boy called Miguel , told a friend ,’’Go inside and see what the man wants from us.’’ So , the boy went inside the barn and the door closed quickly .
The boy got scared that he ran to the barns door to get out , but he couldn’t . Miguel and the other kids heard his friend scream one’s and never saw him came out of the barn again . The police went on looking for the lost kid and found him dead inside the barn with scratches all over his body and nobody ever knew who killed him .
Then the FBI wanted to investigate the death of the boy called Jordan White . So , they went to ask Jordan's friends what had happened . Then the kid called Miguel told the FBI what had happened while they were coming from school . Suddenly , the FBI found out that a demon spirit had killed Jordan .
Then from now on that barn was destroyed and no one would pass were the barn stood and not even an investigator would come and investigate the place . And that's the story .
A tiny voice asked ," Is him the one ?".The Boy wonder who would be the next boy that would be tricked by his friends to go alone inside the old barn and they would never come out again .
It started when the owner of the barn died inside the barn . Then when some kids came from school and passed by the barn and they heard a voice calling them to go inside the barn . Then a boy called Miguel , told a friend ,’’Go inside and see what the man wants from us.’’ So , the boy went inside the barn and the door closed quickly .
The boy got scared that he ran to the barns door to get out , but he couldn’t . Miguel and the other kids heard his friend scream one’s and never saw him came out of the barn again . The police went on looking for the lost kid and found him dead inside the barn with scratches all over his body and nobody ever knew who killed him .
Then the FBI wanted to investigate the death of the boy called Jordan White . So , they went to ask Jordan's friends what had happened . Then the kid called Miguel told the FBI what had happened while they were coming from school . Suddenly , the FBI found out that a demon spirit had killed Jordan .
Then from now on that barn was destroyed and no one would pass were the barn stood and not even an investigator would come and investigate the place . And that's the story .
4 comments:
This story is nice!! I like all the scary parts this story was very interesting.
thanks thats what i thought about it also:)
This story is off the hook i like the parts that were interesting and scary.
nice i like almost scary books
and that almost crip me out
-cv
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