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Friday, March 11, 2011

The Third Floor Bedroom






                                       The Third Floor Bedroom 


It all started when someone left the window open in the third floor bedroom where the wind was blowing so hard.

The little girl ran all the way to the first floor and told her mom, “ mommy the wind scares me alot.” Then her mom said, Oh honey theres nothing to be scared of its just the wind.” “Okay mommy” said the 8 year old Emily.

The next morning when Emily woke up she heard noises on the third floor bedroom, she always heard noises on the the third floor bedroom.

But why there? she thought. She went up there alone her mom and dad were still sleeping that Saturday morning.

She opened the window and the wind threw her in the bed. Emily thought the wind was some kind of spirit of the person who once lived there.Then Emily heard a voice said “you’re alone” and she knew right away that the voice that said that was the mysterious wind. She didn't know what “you’re alone” meant so she ran all the way down to the first floor and went into her mom and dads room but before she could even speak she saw her mom and dad dead.

Emily thought that her parents had been possessed by the strange wind for like 5 minutes and then killed even though she didn't want to believe it she had to. Now she knew what “your alone” meant. She was crying and she was alone in that big and scary house. Emily kept hearing people uttering happily in the third floor bedroom. She was freaking out her hands were shaking and she felt sad about what happened to her parents now the best she could do was go to her neighbors house.

But she didn't want to leave her parents even though they were already dead. She went to her neighbors house and then the police came and they inspected the whole house. Four days had past and Emily and some of her family members where in her parents funeral. That same day at about 6 pm Emily heard on the news that the house had the spirits of the people who use to live there and that they had killed 3 other families including Emilies.

After all that Emily went to live with her aunt and uncle in New York. Emily never forgot what happened to her parents because of the third floor bedroom. But who knows if that house might kill another family like it happen to Emily Mclovin. Poor girl her parents died and she was alone with her aunt and uncle.

When Emily was 20 years old her aunt and uncle died and there was nobody else she could stay with so she got married with a handsome man that had beautiful blue eyes and treated her like she deserved. Emily would never forget what happened every time she was reminded of it.

3 comments:

Blanca said...

I like the the posses part

Amy said...

I like this story it has many details it describes the charcters very well!!!!11

Anonymous said...

I really like this storie. I like how your beginning makes you want to read it because it sounds interesting. When i read the part of when she woke up and she heard noise on the third floor, that got me to read more and more.
-l.h.