Under the Rug
Two weeks passed it happened again. Two weeks ago something very very weird happened, the rug was moving and slipping around on the ground in the living room.
It was around midnight when it happened. A girl named Alisa who had blonde hair and blue eyes and she was about 15 or 16 years old, had to turn off the TV because her brother, that was named Andy which had brown hair and brown eyes, had left the TV on because he had fallen asleep on the couch in the living room wich smelled like rotten milk because her brother Andy had been drinking milk when he fell asleep.
Anyway Alisa was standing there in the livingroom about to turn off the TV when it happened the rug was slipping under Alisa’s feet at first she thought that it was a earthquake but then she noticed that the rug was the only thing moving. After the rug stopped moving she noticed that there was something crawling under the rug so she slowly lifted up the rug and there was the family’s pet hamster. And that's what was making Alisa so scared.
But how did the hamster get out of his cage? The night before Andy had feed the hamster carrots and left the cage door open and the hamster was so scared he ran under the carpet and started to shake.
And that's what happened two weeks ago.
- Jasmine
Two weeks passed it happened again. Two weeks ago something very very weird happened, the rug was moving and slipping around on the ground in the living room.
It was around midnight when it happened. A girl named Alisa who had blonde hair and blue eyes and she was about 15 or 16 years old, had to turn off the TV because her brother, that was named Andy which had brown hair and brown eyes, had left the TV on because he had fallen asleep on the couch in the living room wich smelled like rotten milk because her brother Andy had been drinking milk when he fell asleep.
Anyway Alisa was standing there in the livingroom about to turn off the TV when it happened the rug was slipping under Alisa’s feet at first she thought that it was a earthquake but then she noticed that the rug was the only thing moving. After the rug stopped moving she noticed that there was something crawling under the rug so she slowly lifted up the rug and there was the family’s pet hamster. And that's what was making Alisa so scared.
But how did the hamster get out of his cage? The night before Andy had feed the hamster carrots and left the cage door open and the hamster was so scared he ran under the carpet and started to shake.
And that's what happened two weeks ago.
- Jasmine
3 comments:
I like how you described the characters.
And how you made a twist to the story
I like how the ending goes because its a happy one.
I agree with Naomi i like how you describe
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